Asteroth wrote:
the last 2 to 3 years has bean nothing but
It's "been", a bean is something you eat.
Asteroth wrote:
Sad I bean here sence hu was a thought from Terry when we were still waiting for it to be live and to think we gave the rains to you fuckups after the Jarls dev team makes me sick of what this mod became from then ...
That's quite a sentence, but you put all the full stops at the end, two of those should be in the middle. Again it's "been" not "bean and see
here for the problems you are having with the word "since". (Section 1 entry 2 is actually about you.)
Asteroth wrote:
Way to go lets keep this crap coaster going....1.21z is the fix with diffaculty buff 4/5 spawn ....
You need a "," after "go" and no space between your full stops and the end of the sentence. (There's also only 3 "." in a long pause.)
Asteroth wrote:
Try it on bet ya can't solo it.....
See above.
Asteroth wrote:
I'm saying this shit cuz i have tested it and its far better then this....
It's "Than" not "Then", but nice work with "I'm".
Asteroth wrote:
Before you say all fuck 1.21z cuz its ez try it with the diff at 4/5 spawn and you will see what i'm saying ...
"Before you all say" is the right phrase and you need a "," after "ez".
Asteroth wrote:
If you don't want to experment with it then your yellow and you have no reason to be here and you have no spine...
Replace the bolded with a ",".
Asteroth wrote:
in the end you will see that Terrys upped 1.21z patch will kill this crap any day....... NOW PUT THAT IN YOUR PIPE AND SMOKE IT..
A sentence should start with a capital.
Figured
sence nobody told you this stuff, you maybe wanna learn to stop butchering the language in your old age.
Hope you enjoyed your lesson for today. Next week we'll be using this knowledge to form a coherent sentence so study hard!
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